Situation: Imagine that you are a m

Situation:
Imagine that you are a member of the B.A. English Website committee
and responsible for the webpage called “Samples of Good Paragraphs”
which compiles samples of English paragraphs as examples of good
writing for B.A. English students. The paragraphs below were submitted
by students. Some of them lack certain essential parts of a good
paragraph. Make corrections to them so that they are suitable for being
posted as examples of good paragraphs on the webpage.

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Note: There is a typo in Paragraph 4. In the second line, change "the" to "he": "In 1904, HE sent tea samples to clients using small silk bags.

Results (English) 3:

现状：
想象你是一个成员的专业英文网站
委员会负责网页称为“样品好段落”
编写的英语段落的样品为例
专业英语学生写作的好。以下的段落是学生提交的。他们中的一些人缺乏某些必要的部分，一个好的。改正他们适合
发布为网页上的好段落的例子。

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注：有4段错字。在二线，改变“的”到“他”：“在1904，他送茶样品给客户使用小的丝绸袋。